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I canít promise you
That youíll read this right
I can tell you that
All is in your sight.

There are limits to all
There are fonts to break
There are moments to be
And those to forsake.

But together me and you
We can at least try
We can wander hard
And perhaps die.

Oh sweet the lips
That purse for your sweet face
As darkness doth quick fall
In to place.

The momentum that
We all wish to break
Can only be admired
In that wine dark lake.

Forever we will be
Pale as company
Forget our faults
And no promises make.

Remember my friend, despite all you are, all we are, the universe will tick on, long past our departure.

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