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Poetry in response...

...of 1 Queen to another in the flow of traffic...

Verbal masturbation...enough to warm a small nation as 1 Queen put it.

...and orgasms that leaves listeners begging and pleading for the next line the next smoldering simmering hot rhyme...
that quintessentially matches the next within reach of an ear shot,
this thing is so hot...
So hot that I have to do a recount and a one two check and not only on the... microphone...snap snap they said and I jumped, jumped to the rhythm and I flowed by inspiration and yes with this trickle of verbal masturbation... we came...came a bit closer to wisdom, knowledge and understanding of the use of expressive words... so let them, let them saturate your mind... let the words drip drop in between your minds eye and if it feels and sounds good enough to cry me river... then cry just don't forget to do the one two check, can you hear it? drip drop...drip

Ms. La`Shea Monique've inspired me! that was hot enough to make me spit!


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The following comments are for "poetry in response...of 1 Queen"
by LMJ

"verbal masturbation"
reminds me how much I've missed reading you. you give such good spoken word and I could feel the flow of this one, organic, primal, a thumping bass beat somewhere in the background...

clever, and a pleasure to read because it was so obviously a pleasure to write.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: January 14, 2010 )

Verbal Masturbation...
Hey Auld!!!!! I miss giving it to you too! yes I rather enjoyed writing this piece!

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: January 16, 2010 )

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