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You’re the vision in my nightly dreams;
You’re the star that will always gleam.
If you only knew what runs through my mind!
You’re the moon’s brightest beam.

You’re a wildfire spread from a single match;
you’re the last live ember in the pile of ashes.
If you could only see how bright you burn!
You’re the only bolt of lightning the sky can hope to flash.

You’re the first light of dawn at the break of day;
you’re the first sunny morning in May.
If you could only see yourself through my eyes!
You’re the only one who can captivate me this way.

You’re the dessert wine among the beer,
too sweet to not be near.
If you only knew that even in your silence,
your love is a constant whisper in my ears.


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"Call unto me, and I will answer thee, and show thee great and mighty things, which thou knowest not."-Jeremiah 33:3, King James Version

"Your word is a lamp to guide my feet and a light for my path."-Psalm 119:105, New Living Translation

The present and future are not about who you were in the past-rather, they are about who you are and who you will become.

"Writing is truly glorious in that an author can put on paper the words that fear denies the voice to speak."-from my short story, "Set Free"

"...What you feel is what you are;
What you are is beautiful..."
-from "Slide" by the Goo Goo Dolls

Life surprises you! And I'm talking about the good stuff, because a bad surprise is not a surprise at all, it is just shock and horror. All of these good surprises, they are rewards, and the things that happen to remind you that you matter and that you should make yourself faithful so that you can be deserving of all of life's good surprises. Every wonderful surprise in life is a chance to flourish, so grab life by the horns-but don't ride, steer instead: life's horns are life's joystick. You can handle it, because your life's horns are made especially for you. If you don't give up, all of this will hold true and life will continue to surprise you.

Aubri, a. k. a. "Leopard Lady"


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The following comments are for "If You Only Knew"
by ArsPoet2789ica

wink
did you see that? what about know?

( Posted by: Havefungetreal [Member] On: January 6, 2010 )

If you knew
Sigh! What a lucky person to be loved like that.
Sweet poem - as always good job! I will read this to my wife and good will surely come of it!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: January 7, 2010 )

i would love to write
love poems the way you write love poems. you seem to have such a lovely way with them.

anyway, i loved this love poem.

johnny. john doe.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: January 7, 2010 )





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