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Words we don't need

Words we don't need,
To prove to each other what we feel,
Words we don't say,
We already know this is real,

Say what you want to say,
But I already know what's true,
Whisper in my ear if you want,
But I already know I was meant for you,

Words we don't need,
Just our feelings for our souls,
Words we don't say,
Our emotions already fill us whole,

All I need is your smile,
The look in your eye,
Words we don't need,
I was meant for you, and you for I,

Words we don't need,
Our feelings take control of all,
Words we don't say,
Your there to catch me when I fall,

Your heart is all I need,
So special and unique,
From this day forth no words,
No more need I seek,

Words we don't need,
Without you I don't breathe,
Word's we don't say,
Forever this way.

Words we don't need,
Word's we don't say,
You and I,
Forever this way.


The following comments are for "Words we don't need"
by Sabrina2001

that was really sweet....
This was really nice! awwww....

( Posted by: diason [Member] On: August 11, 2001 )

realy good
i was realy into poetry like 2 years ago but then kinda fell out of it. i have to say that reading this poem realy motivated me to keep writing. i await more from you. and keep up the good work

( Posted by: simon [Member] On: June 8, 2002 )

this poem is really nice, i just thought that you focused more on the rhyming scheme than you did on the arrangement of the words. so the poem is to an extent expressive of your feelings, but it just needs some minor adjustments.

( Posted by: seniorme [Member] On: June 18, 2004 )

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