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sometimes memories drift away 
sometimes friendships fade
sometimes there's nothing there to begin with 
but you touch us either way.
people go through heartache 
and sometimes things get rough, 
but friends are there to talk to
when the going's getting tough. 
i miss your laugh,
i miss your smile, 
i miss holding your hands; 
i wish i could have told you to give life another chance. 
bargaining won't bring you back,
pictures make me cry, 
tears don't help me to forget... 
why'd you want to die?


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The following comments are for "josh"
by kailani24

Josh
I really liked this poem....I still like the ones that rhyme..It was a very moving piece

( Posted by: Morganth [Member] On: May 17, 2003 )

very moving
this poem was very touching. I feel for you, in the loss of a friend that was so dear to you. I can relate to that, but quite not as deeply as this poem portrays. I've said this before, I'm not too fond of poems but this one was worth the reading. Great job :)

( Posted by: babygurl [Member] On: March 4, 2004 )





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