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You are my tragedy
one that I love.

You had to be perfect,
and yet you were odd.

Everything's changed,
I'm still the same.

I spoke your name,
but never outloud.

Guessing and wondering
it now does not matter.

We were as one,
and now with so many.

You are my tragedy-
one that I hate to love.


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