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Here comes Ms. Jolly

Giving praises and blessings.

Little do they know

What’s behind her mask?

Cuts

Pain

Sorrow

Is what you will find.

Will she ever recover?

God only knows.

There she goes

With her big smile

But now you know

The truth of Ms. Jolly.



sunshineangel



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by sunshineangel

Ms. Jolly
Not bad, but I'm left wanting to know something of the story.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: December 15, 2009 )

Ms. Jolly
Hello Lena and Ken, Thank you and have a great Merry Christmas! Teresa

( Posted by: sunshineangel [Member] On: December 16, 2009 )





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