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Some say they can only love once
Some say never
I've leaned with those holding their bonce
I'd give anything to love once
But if I could live forever
I believe I now know of life
To dream for that something never
Is like a knife
And not clever





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The following comments are for "ONCE AND NEVER"
by MTMarshall

Once and Never
Thank you for your glowing rating here....The meter, rhyme scheme and couplet's are but a bit of Frost here you'll find. A little exercise with words and tone.....

Fondly,
Miriam

( Posted by: MTMarshall [Member] On: December 9, 2009 )





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