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Ye fair of eyes
and smooth of skin
how i wish to know your hand
lip to lips
heart to heart
how i wish to never be apart

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if the pen is mighter then the sword then the word processer must be mighter then the missile


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The following comments are for "A Love Limerick "
by johntellall

A Love Limerick
Simple - well done!

( Posted by: sunshineangel [Member] On: December 5, 2009 )





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