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You have known me all my life
You have loved me so compassionately
You stood in the background as
I played devilishly
On the day of living hell
You have stepped in
You took control
You showed yourself
You comforted me
You had mercy on me
You carried my burdens
Now I know you
Like I have never known you before
Just as an armored knight
I will prepare for the war
that shall come against me
For loving you
as you love me

Everything I do, I do with passion. Come join me and see what I can do with words!

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The following comments are for "Dear God"
by DBurke

Dear God!
Love this...There aren't many of us who praise God in public so openly.

Keep them coming!


( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: December 7, 2009 )

Dear God Indeed
God is good - all the time
All the time - God is good
Thankfully God's grace does grant us tender mercies
Bless YOu

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: December 7, 2009 )


( Posted by: PAPALAS [Member] On: December 8, 2009 )

Thank you all!
I have two sides that I think I write best but in my opinion they are the most honest things I can write about! One side is the dark, grim, sinister side of things; and the other is inspirational and religion (as I feel God does not get as much credit as he deserves! Thank you all for such positive feedback, as always its a pleasure to bring material that you can enjoy!

( Posted by: DBurke [Member] On: December 11, 2009 )

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