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"Crazy" soaked in
slowly
his sanity
a cracked
river bed
sun baked
with paranoia

he points
laughs
his tongue tense
to throw stones
a verbal assault

"That guy hears voices!"
"This guy is nuts!"
As he stares out the window
unaware
of his own ghost
reflecting
and looking
right back
through him




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The following comments are for "Join The Club"
by rancidsauce

True
Very true indeed, and it speak to much as to how we judge everyone else but yet can't see it in ourselves

( Posted by: johntellall [Member] On: December 3, 2009 )

The Club
Where you been? I missed you.
Another good one - all of us are just a few failed synapses and a terrible event away from the Club.
Hitting the mark!
Bless you

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: December 3, 2009 )





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