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The softest touch
Like a new tear
Falling for freedom

Falling
For your slightest whisper
In debt to your
Heart beat

Smooth
Subtly forming rhythms
Stories of lust
Youth

In why you looked through me
Saw that all eyes looked back
All forms saw truth
Structure

With no limits
No wait
No apathy
A strong mind
Our strong kiss

While hate fuels
Progress
You taught me
Love
Builds worlds


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