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i was letting my mind build with things to say.
i was back again for the first time.
I was lost again, I found her again.
She held me tight like I never left her.
She is my drive, she is my passion.
She is my release when I cant talk.
She and I are words that are molded to paper.
Writing, you saved my life.


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IN THE END THE LAS WILL BE FIRST.


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The following comments are for "I NEVER LEFT"
by PAPALAS

I never left
I'm glad she is still with you. Nice piece!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: December 2, 2009 )

THANK U
ME TOO, IM GLAD SOMEBODY GOT IT..

( Posted by: PAPALAS [Member] On: December 8, 2009 )





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