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for josh brubaker 
i try to put my feelings into words 
and make them something tangible 
but it's useless -- i still can't understand. 
i don't know what to think... 
my emotions are on a haitus. 
don't bother me. 
just leave me alone. 
i don't know how to feel... 
i hate everyone 
but i have no reason to. 
i don't know what to say... 
except that i'm fine, 
just tired; i had a late night. 
buy my empty excuse for downcast eyes 
and forced smile. 
i don't know much of anything 
except it really isn't fair. 
i hate you. 
...i miss you.

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The following comments are for "i miss you"
by kailani24


Once again you have managed to capture a very personal yet universal experience in a very realistic and poetic fashion. I especially like the way you ended this piece. It's something most people wouldn't admit to themselves, the fact that anger and even hate can be an important part of the healing process.
Excellent poem.

( Posted by: Bartleby [Member] On: May 14, 2003 )

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