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Tonight I shall not ride
Against the setting sun, but with it,
Against the rising moon
And against the shade and Death;
Tomorrow shall be today,-
As well as yesterday
Shall be one day,-
For I shall not dream
But when I choose to,
For I will not rest today
Until I see what I want to see;
Death shall not come to my corner,
But I will come to it,-
When seeds I'm ready to palm,
And plant them in the ground,-
And forests shall overgrow my grave,
But only bud by my labor and remains;
When tonight will be today,
I will be in love, alive,
And singing on the precipice of joy.


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by mj20300

excellent
My friend, I like this, very nice.

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: November 17, 2009 )

I ride
There is something wonderful, in any piece, where the protagonist takes life and destiny in hand - literally or in the abstract. Nice read - left me satisfied.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: November 21, 2009 )





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