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Burning through the mist
of me
while writing words of love
thinking I was
once a poet

Delusions of banter
now form this

Distance
remains
elsewhere
beyond



11.12-13.09
version

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below the subliminal
deep within manipulation
that's where tr^th resides

2 Dec 2011






























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The following comments are for "Calling in well"
by Bobby7L

the title alone
was worth the price of admission...i love this poem but can't explain. that happens sometime with poetry.

have a good weekend.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: November 15, 2009 )

jjdoe...
John,
Thanks.

Ciao

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: November 15, 2009 )

Calling in well
I don't know my friend. I like it but have a hard time wrapping my dull head around it. I'll come back later and read it again.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: November 21, 2009 )

jonpenny
Ken,
Looking up, around and within..

Thanks
B

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: November 28, 2009 )

Calling Bobby7L
Nicely done as always. Hope you're well. -Philo

( Posted by: Philo [Member] On: December 11, 2009 )

Philo
On one level this was a 'hello'..
Thanks.

Still looking around..

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: December 13, 2009 )

: )




I like the atmosphere that I'm transferred to while reading your words..I can picture them too.a lonesome in a .foggy..wide place ..cold..at night....

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: March 13, 2010 )

Hiba
grazie

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: March 14, 2010 )

Delusions of banter
I've always like that your posts have levels of interpretation. That is as it should be in poetry.

To me this reads of leaving with longings in tow.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: May 1, 2010 )

of detachment...
..retrogradi

Francisco,
take/transliteration of/by reader is life-experience/perception influenced..

levels..indeed.

grazie,
b

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 1, 2010 )





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