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Today, I'm a new woman
I felt the warmth of the sun
And has enlighten the way
No more darkness
No more emptiness
No more loneliness
Because I felt his love
The present and future is ours.

Sunshineangel


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The following comments are for "New Woman"
by sunshineangel

New Woman
Few words, a lot of feeling. Sweet and simple. Nice work!

Dave

( Posted by: HeRoCoMpLeX [Member] On: November 13, 2009 )

New Woman
Dave, Thank you! :-)

( Posted by: sunshineangel [Member] On: November 14, 2009 )

Four letter word!
It's amazing what a four letter word can do for mankind.

If only there were more of it in the world!

This is lovely.

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: November 14, 2009 )

Four letter word - LOVE
Beatrice , I agree. Thank you for your comment. Terry

( Posted by: sunshineangel [Member] On: November 15, 2009 )

No Fear of Clouds
the dark emptiness of loneliness...
foreshadows a cloud of fear

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 22, 2016 )





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