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Journal Day 2

Indeed made it to the clearing this day. The weather is clear, and though I'll need to scramble over the next ridge my spirits are high. The ghost is fading, but I still catch a glimpse of here out of the corner of my eye from time to time. I'm becoming more comfortable with my surroundings, though, and more accustomed to this trail I'm blazing. I don't expect others to trek it behind me, but I'm driven by the explorer's spirit and continue on.


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The copse of trees Eli had just come through still lingered in his mind. It had only served as motivation, though, and time spent dawdling was kept to a minimum. The sunset was cresting and the fire was ebbing as he nodded off to sleep.

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--rmb


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