Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
0.00

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

I'm violently happy,
they don't understand.
thought within a thought
my mind;a vast land

I'm violently happy,
they "worry" too much.
inner voice speaking
connected with a gland

I'm violently happy,
they forget desires.
suppression is gone
ice melted over fire

I'm violently happy,
they remain grounded.
fly;rushing up a pole
lowering down a hole

------
Bedouin Goddess


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Violently Happy"
by Goddess

Happy
Maybe I'm just out of it today, but I didnt really follow this one. I love the title "Violently Happy" though. Its a delicious turn of phrase.

Much Love

Dave

( Posted by: HeRoCoMpLeX [Member] On: November 13, 2009 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: