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give me a minute..
i'm still thinking what to type
or figuring me out
or evaluating what we are

leave me alone
or not..

i want you
was that hard to understand

i'm tired of your crap
please just cut it out

turn your back
and don't face me again

smile at me
and i will never let you go

this piece is ugly
my life, please forgive me

love me
don't love me

or better yet
stop my existence

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by angeli

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