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Vanity vanity
though my heart is despair
You & me, you & me
have nothing to spare

Vessels & tunnels
& all the shit
You & me, you & me
never quit

try to comprehend
You & me, you & me
messages to send

Physicist of lyricist
looking & speaking
You & me, you & me
atoms leaking

rushed time
You & me, you & me
live by the sublime

Bedouin Goddess

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