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Empty bruised eyes
gazing through a dirty window,
autumnal treetops silhouetted
against a carnation pink horizon
under a dead slate sky;
overexposed to the crowd,
misanthrope left numb.

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The following comments are for "Slate"
by verve

Nice one
Concise,rich in imagery. Nice work!!

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: November 5, 2009 )

Pablo nailed it as you did writing it. Great job.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: November 6, 2009 )

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