- published: May 12, 2003
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Often, I sit and think.
My life and my trials, many passed, more failed.
Love lost and new love found.
So many choices, even more ways to fall.
Perhaps life was never mine to live.
Such a lovely
To the lady in the Pub down the road in Chester
From a drunk
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