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On Allhallows Eve, the unexpected occurs.

Looking out my window, what do I see?

My Royal Knight galloping into my courtyard.

His armor shines with a glow no onto any other man.

Black velvet hair caresses his handsome face.

Royal Knight charges his way to his Lady.

Covering her with his purple majestic cape.

My Lady, I am here for you to love and protect you.

Royal Knight kept his promised.

That night he returned three times.

With each of his visits he enchanted his Lady more.

His Lady fell asleep looking at our portrait.

Remembering his loving words.

I do love you, My Lady.


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