Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
8.5

(2 votes)


RatingRated by
8pablowilliams
9sunshineangel

You must login to vote

i drift into my nothingness
my eye lids are closed
i hear my heart beating;

Eye have seen
Eye knew; spirit keen

i open my eyes
pupils reflect the light
i hear my heart beating;

Eye have seen
Eye knew; spirit keen

i see Sun rays
they shine on me
i hear my heart beating.

------
Bedouin Goddess


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for ""
by Goddess





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: