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When I cannot see you, I sense you.
You are an apparition in the dark
until I take your hand
and you touch my heart.
You cannot obscure yourself
even in the shadows of the night.
You burn so bright
in the rays of daylight.
Even when you freeze in fear,
you are the fire to my wall of ice.
If you let me, Iíd hold you near.

Your hands were made to touch;
I want to feel the rush.
As youíre breaking down my defence,
donít be afraid to let yourself in.


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"Call unto me, and I will answer thee, and show thee great and mighty things, which thou knowest not."-Jeremiah 33:3, King James Version

"Your word is a lamp to guide my feet and a light for my path."-Psalm 119:105, New Living Translation

The present and future are not about who you were in the past-rather, they are about who you are and who you will become.

"Writing is truly glorious in that an author can put on paper the words that fear denies the voice to speak."-from my short story, "Set Free"

"...What you feel is what you are;
What you are is beautiful..."
-from "Slide" by the Goo Goo Dolls

Life surprises you! And I'm talking about the good stuff, because a bad surprise is not a surprise at all, it is just shock and horror. All of these good surprises, they are rewards, and the things that happen to remind you that you matter and that you should make yourself faithful so that you can be deserving of all of life's good surprises. Every wonderful surprise in life is a chance to flourish, so grab life by the horns-but don't ride, steer instead: life's horns are life's joystick. You can handle it, because your life's horns are made especially for you. If you don't give up, all of this will hold true and life will continue to surprise you.

Aubri, a. k. a. "Leopard Lady"


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The following comments are for "Feel the Rush"
by ArsPoet2789ica

Rush
Hmmmmm! 11 lines to a 4 line stanza? To me this one sang like a song with the last stanza natuaral as a refrain. For me break it up in 4 line verses and it sings. Just A thought -
Always good! Thanks
ken

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: November 3, 2009 )





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