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I weep for years that passed and come,
I weep for time,
Though it doesn't weep for me,
I weep in sleep,
When sleep weeps without a dream;
I weep for love and with love,
Because it does not reign on me;
I weep with aging trees in autumn,
And with leaves close to decay;
I weep much like the ocean heaves
Its might on some solitary beach;
But I don't weep because I'm sad,
Nor because I'm overlapsed with joy,
I weep because I am alive,
Because, though joy and sorrow are intertwined,
Life has given me a voice,
A voice to speak of who I am.


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The following comments are for "My Weep"
by mj20300

Weeping
nice.

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: October 31, 2009 )

Weeping for love of life!
I absolutely love this...especially the line "I weep because I am alive!"

At my vantage point and age, I appreciate every day more and more, and weep that I didn't realize how precious life was when I was younger.

Nice work!
Beatrice Boyle

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: November 1, 2009 )

weep
Concise, lucid thoughts well penned. Nice! Very nice!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: November 2, 2009 )





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