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I wish I knew what's happening....

I see no radiation,....

Inception is hard to grasp....

My stem has been stationed,....







Standing in the middle of the tunnel....

I never seem to turn....

Passing to force my presence....

Yet, forever I'll yearn....







Despite the sequence....

I could manage space,....

The loop is incomplete....

Time speed to erase,....







Standing in the middle of the tunnel....

I never seem to turn....

Passing to force my presence....

Yet, forever I'll yearn....







No, I won't exceed the line....

Limit is a shield,....

I'll suffer the common....

& go play in their field.....

------
Bedouin Goddess


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