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Locked in perception

Notice how bright I am,

Do you know the answer?

Truth's origin is a sham,



Grant me an army of thinkers

Uncover the concept of me,

Cognition is slaved

Reality is waiting to flee,



Control my inner world

Harass my state of mind,

My eyes don't see

Images inside are combined,



Quarrel with my visionary

I want to know my future like my past,

Everything exists with an order

However, the magic around is vast,



It's the spirit's quest

Some ghost in a machine,

Body is possessed

I am not a victim as it may seem,



Design my destiny

Making dreams concrete,

Extend the thoughts

Sensory systems will deceit,



I am emotions

& they are me,

Widen my path

Dock on my identity,



Thunder storms evolve in my head

Opening the mill,

My cells are fed

Recreating my defined hill,



God isn't separated from me

Let them fire my belief,

God is one with me

Embracing my relief,



The observer conquers

This is not my God,

The observer wanders

Only to my back God I will nod.

------
Bedouin Goddess


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The following comments are for "Think"
by Goddess

Dock on my identity
Kinda cool this. Thanks for sharing!

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: November 1, 2009 )

Think
Very nice. A wonderful exploration - thanks for bringing me along.
Bless you.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: November 2, 2009 )

AWESOME
you know, i have been all over the nation and there is an army of children dedicating themselves to these same concepts... mucho love Goddess, we will overcome. 60's got us here, 30's got us there, now we can go all the way..... mucho lovins sister.

Locked in perception

Notice how bright I am,

Do you know the answer?

Truth's origin is a sham,



Grant me an army of thinkers

Uncover the concept of me,

Cognition is slaved

Reality is waiting to flee,


PERFECTION

( Posted by: roach [Member] On: November 2, 2009 )





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