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Flying

Hear, I soar, on wings of beauty,
seen by self and realized,
subterfuge can make one stronger,
I don't know why we don't rise,

feeling freedom in our joy there,
just enough to make all right,
stripped of frenzy to provide, for,
providence has shown her light,

showered by our past achievements,
greedy children hoard from sight,
wasn't, first our goal to get here,
now for love we've won that fight,

oh, I don't see what has turned
into deception in our kind,
listening to crystal heartbeats
feel the teardrops in my mind,

seasons come and seasons go,
and sinew weaves between the joints,
seasons come and seasons go,
and, well, i guess that is the point.


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"If the America people ever allow private banks to control the issuance of their currencies, first by inflation and then by deflation, the banks and corporations that will grow up around them will deprive the people of all their prosperity until their children will wake up homeless on the continent their fathers conquered." ~Thomas Jefforson


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The following comments are for "Flying"
by roach

Flying
I loved the high tone and rhythm. I was left with a great feeling but no connection in meaning.I have been pretty dull witted lately - I guess my bio-rhythms are off.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: October 30, 2009 )

lol
its about where we are at as a species, and where we can be, right now. thanks for the comment man :)

( Posted by: roach [Member] On: October 31, 2009 )





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