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Days of Autumn wane
Her golden majestic leaves
Now shriveled and dead



Nature is fickle


After painting a protrait


She changes her mind!




------
Grandma Bea


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The following comments are for "The fickleness of Nature"
by Beatrice Boyle

Nature
Perfect! I couldn't have said it any better myself.

Much Love,

Dave

( Posted by: HeRoCoMpLeX [Member] On: October 30, 2009 )

Thank you Dave
So happy you enjoyed them Dave, although the form didn't reproduce the way it was intended. The second group was supposed to begin diagonally under the first with no double spaces in between.

Sometimes there is a chain of them, all the same subject, each part relating to the other...telling a story.

Love Haiku's.

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: October 30, 2009 )





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