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Love? 
How do you know if you’re in love? 
Is there a tingle in your feet, 
Butterflies in your stomach, 
Your heart starts racing, 
And so nervous,  
Oh so nervous. 
Are those the signs, 
Of a sickness we call love? 


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*for ever there*
*Cait*


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by for ever there

Love
It's authentic. At least I guess it is. I've never known marital love.

Point: It seems a bit generic. I'm not sure if you're writing about the marital, or some other.

( Posted by: dfortyseven [Member] On: June 4, 2005 )





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