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Iíve Lost Love (Song Writers Challenge)

Authors Note: For all you guitarist out there the verse is played Em, C, G, D and the chorus is Am, Fsus, C, G. The strumming pattern for both is the same as the song ďSave Tonight,Ē by Eagle Eye Cherry. I hope you like it.

V1
Iíve walked, through this world for a while
Iíve come and Iíve gone in style
Iíve lost love and loves lost me
But now with you I finally see

Chorus
Hold me tight, and stay the whole night through
I know its right, I feel it holding you
This love we share, I know you feel it too
You canít deny, the way that I love you

V2
I have roamed, a slave to my desire
You came along and quenched the fire
Iíve lost love and loves lost me
But now with you Iím finally free

Chorus
Hold me tight, and stay the whole night through
I know its right, I feel it holding you
This love we share, I know you feel it too
You canít deny, the way that I love you

V3
Donít you worry, as time goes by
Iíll be here, with love in my eyes
Iíve lost love and loves lost me
But now with you its destiny

Chorus
Hold me tight, and stay the whole night through
I know its right, I feel it holding you
This love we share, I know you feel it too
You canít deny, the way that I love you


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'But I don't want to go among mad people,' said Alice. 'Oh, you can't help that,' said the cat. 'We're all mad here.'
Lewis Carroll



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The following comments are for "Song Writers Challenge"
by HeRoCoMpLeX

@dave the Challenge
Nicely done!!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: October 24, 2009 )

cool...
This is so romantic...my husband is romantic in his thinking and ways with me like this, beautiful lyrics;-)

Tashi Delek!
Karma

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: October 24, 2009 )

@Ken&Lena
Thank you very much for the kind words and high ratings. Karma, I told you once that I believed in being any kind of romantic, even a hopeless one. LOL, I think stuff like this comes from my hopeless romantic side.

Namaste,

Dave

( Posted by: HeRoCoMpLeX [Member] On: October 27, 2009 )

Song
Feeling the love - GREAT!!!!!

( Posted by: sunshineangel [Member] On: October 27, 2009 )

The man in tights
Your such a sap! Lol but seriously I know nothing about writing songs or playing the guitar. This is about as mushy as apple sauce though.

The hell with it, good job buddy. Now if you would just sing it for all of us.... :)

( Posted by: HavocTheDemon [Member] On: October 30, 2009 )

WOW!!
Just so you know I had my husband read this, even if you want to punch him in the nose, I thought he might get to know you first through your words. Then when or if you punch him he'll know it comes from a caring guy really. = )

Nice I really like this one, but I'm not getting sappy this time. still laughing from your last post!
Can't wait to read more.
Heather

( Posted by: trynfinity [Member] On: October 31, 2009 )

Thanking three
Angel: I'm glad your feeling the love, thank you for the comment and rating. I'm a big fan of yours, so praise from you is high praise indeed.

Rodney: I know, I know, its a little mushy. When I get home, I plan on video tapeing myself playing and singing all the songs I have posted her on lit so far and putting them up on myspace and facebook. Thanks for commenting. I'll be over to your 3rd installment shortly.

Heather: I'm glad your husband read it, perhaps he'll learn something...but I'll leave that alone. As for punching him in the nose, well, you know the conditions for that to happen so we'll hope he doesnt go there. I'm glad you liked it my friend. I look forward to your comments whenever I post something.

Thank you all for your comments and ratings, it means the world to me that you care enough to read and critque my work. Please know that I read and consider very carefully all comments and ratings. It does my heart good to know that even one person enjoyed something of mine. Bless you all!

Much Love,

Dave

( Posted by: HeRoCoMpLeX [Member] On: October 31, 2009 )

Very Nice
I find myself just learning the guitar these last few months and I can hear what you wrote to the music. Great job.

Keep on writing. Your workd speaks volumes!
Big Chief

( Posted by: BigChief [Member] On: November 22, 2009 )





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