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The pond dries for you
Everyday refreshed anew
Love's rain falls from dew.


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The following comments are for "rimesrimesnmorerimes"
by Robert Walker

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Wording could have had a better flow.

( Posted by: chapter1 [Member] On: December 27, 2009 )





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