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I

If I choose not
my own words to use,
will you blame me
for my hypocrisy
or for poor discretion
when insecurities
are masked with hyperbole
and a single identity-
multiple.

II

And will you my dear
also welcome
this fresh new constant
aching impulse-
It seems immature
It feels familiar
So, why not let
the originals
be replaced
for their occasional failures.



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