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Grey skies rule today
reflecting the love that was
trust the sun is there


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The following comments are for "hopeful haiku?"
by Robert Walker

beautiful
this is great

( Posted by: roach [Member] On: October 17, 2009 )

thanks
Thank you Roach.

( Posted by: robert walker [Member] On: October 17, 2009 )

Trust
As you know - not my favorite form, but this one got me. Very nice!!!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: October 17, 2009 )

lol Jon
I know Jon, haikus are by far not my favorite either. I do these from time to time because I'm working out my literary muscles. It gets teh juices flowing for me. Besides the part of a haiku that I enjoy is the concept and challenge of getting entire thoughts through to the reader/thinker in such a small structred way.
Thanks Jon

( Posted by: Robert Walker [Member] On: October 17, 2009 )





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