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Optical illusions presented forum.
Surreal images pulsing decorum.
Splendid wonders depicts pity's.
Jeer's of power, speculate.
Masked symmetry clouds reality.
Freaks partake stationed positions.
Fashion linen leers askance.
Sideshow fills broken ego parts.
Big top circus clowns, grease faces.
A fancy show, with golden laces.

10/14/2009 POEWHIT

JESUS SAVES

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SCRATCHES ON THE PAGE,
MAKING NOISE


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The following comments are for "THE SIDESHOW"
by poewhit

The Sideshow
I liked this - though I would like to see it expanded. Your word choices were interesting and evocative. Thanks

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: October 15, 2009 )

Hmmm..
Oh the scorn and sarcasm in your words..felt you mocking the superficiality of all..beautiful!!

( Posted by: niel3995 [Member] On: October 16, 2009 )

Jester Jesus
Unless I've totally misunderstood this one, I don't know if I appreciate Jesus being portrayed a greasy-faced clown. ;)

( Posted by: thetesticularprancer [Member] On: October 16, 2009 )





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