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Its a shame i don't belong with you, when i belong to you,
its a sad thing that you push me away, that you don't notice,
that my efforts were childish and unworthy then,
and stupid and unworthy now.

Everybody saw me but you.
Your wife, your children,
not my brothers or mom, but more family than you.
And the family you push away, old man.

Why do you hate to see me.
What is it that makes you repel me, replacing me with fantasy?
Do you think your God won't notice?

I freaking hate you.
I hope you live to see me shine,
because I will tell of how you tried to put me out,
and I want you to see that.

I have no more excuses.
There, your gift is more than wealth.
My anger is not a deluded fantasy,
you are wrong.
Own it.

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"If the America people ever allow private banks to control the issuance of their currencies, first by inflation and then by deflation, the banks and corporations that will grow up around them will deprive the people of all their prosperity until their children will wake up homeless on the continent their fathers conquered." ~Thomas Jefforson


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The following comments are for "Daddy"
by roach

Daddy.....
There are three sides to every story, however, this sounds like a personal experience that is the heartbeat of pain.

Hopefully, you are just a great writer with a vivid imagination....Hopefully....

Thank you for the wake up read this beautiful Tuesday....

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: December 28, 2010 )

:)
Thank You JetfireK. I write so I don't go crazy ") I hope your

( Posted by: roach [Member] On: December 28, 2010 )

Don't go crazy
I would like to hear about what would make you, "Don't go crazy!"

Sounds like a good forth coming story, to me.

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: December 28, 2010 )





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