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my heart is filled with the pain,
as quickly as the sunshine changes to rain.
a rain that covers the ground,
like hurt that came around.
the cloud came so suddenly,
heavy darkness surrounded me.
i looked for shelter under which i could hide,
but it like you, had left my side.
and i am wondering under open skies,
the rain disguising the tears in my eyes.
not knowing which direction to turn,
not knowing which lesson i should learn.
not letting other have access to your pain,
or not leaving the house when it looks like rain.

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