How to feel like a fool!
by man eating maniac (Member) - published: May 9, 2003
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Category - Poetry
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You are everything to me

I was looking everywhere

But I just couldn’t see

I looked here and there

Every goddamn place

But the one place I didn’t look

Was right in front of my face

You were waiting patiently

You always kept your cool

It took me so long

Now I feel like a fool

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The following comments are for "How to feel like a fool!"
by man eating maniac

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I have to say that I got a kick out of this piece. It's very sincere in the emotions and sentiment it conveys, but does it without relying on the typical means to say them. I love the profanity in pieces like this, I know I have been in situations where vulgarity was the easiest way to make a point on the tenderest of topics. This one would make a helluva greeting card, no offense intended.

( Posted by: Bartleby [Member] On: May 12, 2003 )

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