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I move like
the outline
of a square.

Not like a circle,

a circle cuts
through the wind,

speed affords it
the flash of
ecstatic feeling.

Not me,
I move in
squares.


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"Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead." Charles Bukowski


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The following comments are for "Useless poet that I am"
by pablowilliams

square
brilliantly short sweet and to the point

( Posted by: thesadpoet [Member] On: October 4, 2009 )

Hmmm
A real chin stroker this one Pablo. It gives one pause for thought and suggests that whether we travel in circles or squares we always end up back in the same place.

( Posted by: Ogg [Member] On: October 4, 2009 )

useless poet
LOL Knocked my socks off. Good one my friend.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: October 4, 2009 )

you all...
Thanks to you all for your positive feedback!

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: October 4, 2009 )

Useless Poet...
...Ogg has said it all for me already in his comment above concerning this piece of work--the old saying that goes something like this; "no matter where you go there you are". What goes around comes around whether by square or circle. I like this;-)

Tashi Delek!
Karma

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: October 9, 2009 )





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