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This isn't an original work. That's why I'm posting it on my blog. I came across this some time ago and I was suppose to give it to my friend Paul, but he never answers his email. I thought it was good and I wanted to share it.

“Water desires that no one restrain it
The grain desires that no one grind it
The wind desires that no one stop it
The mind desires that no one correct it,
But water gives light when restrained
The grain gives taste when ground
The wind turns electric when stopped
The mind becomes edified by bowing

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