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the end of the tunnel is cold 
i'm not attractive, i'm too damn bold 
could you see me as who i am 
are you strong enough to be my only man 
 
i'm not afraid of dying alone 
but my hair is so two toned 
i want to lie awake in your arms 
but you can't see me, here 
 
if the light is there, it's distant 
they say i can but i just can't 
if i could just have the courage to try 
then maybe...tonight i wont cry 
 
you try to distance yourself from the truth 
you can't see me i'm so see-through 
if i could just open your eyes 
maybe you would realize 
 
i'm not afraid of telling myself 
how much i care, and i want to be yours 
its the telling you that I just cannot do 
you think my eyes are the only thing blue? 
 
i'd rather live alone than risk hearing no 
i'd rather run away than stay and say hello 
i'm too afraid of what you might think 
because my heart can't handle another break 
 
so when you see me around the school 
you play it nice and act all cool 
but you know somethings just not right 
you wanna tell me but you continue to fight 
 
open up, and tell me your heart 
if its not me, it doesn't mean its not art 
loves a game, although it gets sappy 
i'd much rather see you be happy

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If I did it...I didn't mean to.
If I hurt you...I didn't mean to.
If I left you...I didn't mean to.
If I scared you...I didn't mean to.
If I loved you...I didn't mean to.


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The following comments are for "Someone who would never understand the emotions I hold deep inside"
by Nicicole

what a poem!
i really loved ur poem, it reminded me of sum stuff that i went through, although i was on the other end of the line. thanx 4 clearing everything up 4 me, youre a good writer. keep it up.

( Posted by: Elias [Member] On: May 8, 2003 )





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