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maybe i was born to be admired and not to be loved
maybe..

because every time i try to love
everything seemed to go smoothly
then suddenly, fate interferes
stealing my heart and ruptures it into pieces

why?
they say iím beautiful, they say iím fine
they say iím cool; they force me not to cry
i am pushing my limit i gave it all

everything must be worth a shot
i aimed high and almost succeeded
i had what i wanted, but oh


they leave me just like that
turning their backs and throwing me away

is this what i truly deserve?
should i play it safe and have some reserves?
no, love is not a game!

for in a game, someone must win
and the other will lose
as for me, i know i am winning
then my opponent will quit
and leave me struggling for my victory

*sigh*

iím just tired
tired of taking it seriously
and being dumped, trashed and stepped on

*sigh*

let me tell you a story
i am not a serious person
but i didnít took him for granted
for once, i acted properly
i danced like i will never dance again.
it happened and it ended

*sigh*

regrets after regrets
could have
should have
might have
when will it reach the end?

*sigh*

misery contains me as Luna promises me another beginning

*sigh*

beginning without an end

*sigh*



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The following comments are for "*closing time, every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end*"
by angeli

closing time
is this what i truly deserve?
should i play it safe and have some reserves?
no, love is not a game!

for in a game, someone must win
and the other will lose
as for me, i know i am winning
then my opponent will quit
and leave me struggling for my victory


Ahhh, this is wonderful. I am begining to really identify with your work. "then my oppenent will quit..." This in particular was delicious. Kind of a "hit me with your best shot," feel. I'm now officially a fan, great job and thanks for sharing.

Dave

( Posted by: HeRoCoMpLeX [Member] On: September 21, 2009 )





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