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he treated me like a princess
and kissed me goodnight
hugged me, and promised me forever

melancholy is to gloom
i had a handful of days with william shakespeare
we conquered the world, owned it.
struggle was out of sight

no, i was obviously blinded
because him and me-us,
it was like tasting cherries for the first time
pure sweetness..hmmmn..
with a kick of delight on its side

blame the alcohol…blame me!
i know it’s my fault
i seduced him
led him into my diabolic trap

oh yes, i did! i had him.
but i warned him not to come near me
i am addictive, a mouthwatering
nicotine of a menthol cigarette

karma struck me
what will i do?
i scanned genesis again and found it.

why did adam eat the forbidden fruit?
because he loves eve
he loves me, or better yet, he loved me

since ‘us’ is now a part of my past
must i burry it into my stop-it! treasure chest?
maybe kismet happens

i’m still hoping
you and me, taking the ends of the world

come for me my dear prince
i want to be enclosed once more
on your delicate embrace
will you?

don’t you remember your promise?
you promised not to break my heart
you broke it
you had it whole and you broke it

you once answered me

“yup, i’m really falling for you.”

you fell

and i was left hanging

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