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I wrote this a couple of days ago when I was living and sharing my life with my dear Luigi. Before him, my heart was broken. He melted it and promised me forever. We lasted for a week. But Iím quite sure that what we had was true. This is short because I was so happy the night I wrote it (I was actually jumping and shouting of joy). It was the same night when he asked me if would consider him as my lifetime partner. This also includes a sonnet. Enjoy, this is me when I am happy.

Thank you
For treating me like a princess, my dear prince
We barely know each other
But we managed to establish a connection
That will keep us together

It may seem confusing,
All of these
But I am happy.
This feeling,
A mixture of emotions,
I just canít put them into words of
Joy, excitement, fear, anticipation
And courage to love.

Soon, it wonít be long
We will reach our golden cup,
Right there, waiting for us
For us to be what we ought to be.

I will hold your hand
While we enjoy this typical walk together.

wiki (7th sonnet)

I felt my heart taking a bath
An overwhelming feeling that I crave
Yes, yes, lead the path
It showered from one gigantic wave

The rainbow reached my feet
My tears and pain, almost passť
Come and see, who will remember my defeat?
Never thought it was easy to blow away

Your scent, your touch, I like it
The way you stare deep into my soul
Donít stop singing for my heartbeat
Promise me that you will never let me go

Wish I could squeeze everything
Letís just wait on what it will bring

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