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I shouted
"I love you!" Daughter
waved bye bye.

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by CocoaHill

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I watched my daughter go off to College. She climbed into a too small and smoking car with two young slender and artistic men and headed off for Seattle. My stomach was in a knot and I was being patted by my wife. She survived and is thriving. Both young men survived and are thriving. I survived. Hit home, this.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: September 10, 2009 )

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