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I came,
I saw,
And I turned away
(careful not to be seen).
A mocking finger
pointing at me-
Another Average Wannabe.
A personal joke
(among only a few)
not even worth
the squint of an eye
touched by humor genuine.
How Ironic!
Forever, a flicker-
Never making it
to a flame.


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The following comments are for "Irony"
by niel3995

Irony
In my head, you created an image of walking upon a significant other doing somthing they shouldnt with someone else. I wasnt even worth a glance while they did the deed. I guess I put more stock in the thing than she did. I may be far afield of the point, but I loved it none the less.

A personal joke
(among only a few)

This line was especially eye catching. Wonderful work!

Keep Scribling,

Dave

( Posted by: HeRoCoMpLeX [Member] On: September 10, 2009 )

Irony
Who doesn't get this all the way to the core. Nice job!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: September 10, 2009 )





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