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You make me feel
audience-intense.
A different 'peer' pressure-
Never sure
when those eyes probe
or how many times
or where..
Gaze grazing contours
discern; differentiate.
Taunting-
To exhibit
To be eye-licked
Naive and innocent,
when I yield.
Electric,
when I don't.
If it is a game,
I'd rather not play.


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The following comments are for "Peer Pressure"
by niel3995

Peer Pressure
I'm sure you have a clear connection to this thing that is inherent in the young and the not so young. So sad that we don't teach personal worth and definition - what kind of world would it be if none acted like herd animals. Nice piece.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: September 10, 2009 )





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