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Slowly and surely
forward over its slime trail
this unwashed shell moves

Reverend Antinormalitā

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The following comments are for "Den Gastropodous Voyager: Går Som en Snegle"
by TheTesticularPrancer

The Snail.......
"Remember, remember, the 5th of November. The gun poweder treason and plot. I see no reason why the gun powder treason should ever be forgot."

( Posted by: HeRoCoMpLeX [Member] On: September 5, 2009 )

Den Snail
Ok I do love you man - but Haiku's are not my thing. I have posted before that these little three line 5-7-5 brain twister/teasers are, to me, like that little sliver of avocado in a sushi roll. I like the whole thing.

To all of you who write in this form well: I love you - your work is terrific - you are smarter than me - share amongst yourselves because you are worthy of the praise I seem unable to give - because I am to common, unsophisticated and lack proper breeding and training - because I am thick headed and obstinate! Forgive me. Mea culpa! Whew! ;)

Now having written that, with guilty soul expunged, I can freely comment . Ist das eine schneke deutsch, o una lumaca romano? ..ab simpliciter esculentus?
Great fun as always!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: September 6, 2009 )

@Jonpenny & HeRoPleX
Nope, the title is in Norwegian.
I think haiku is totally stupid but I've found them a good way to stay productive when I can't whip up anything stronger. Better than nothing. I also get a kick out of mocking the form.

I like your quote above, Brother HeRoPleX. Appealing to someone with a "vendetta" such as myself.

( Posted by: thetesticularprancer [Member] On: September 6, 2009 )

@ The Rev
I liked your Haiku, and meant to comment on it. For some reason, your avatar hit me like a brick, even though I've seen it several times. This quote just popped out of me, like word vomit. Long before the movie came out I was a fan of the graphic novels. Anyways, random rambling and such, I seem to be developing a reputation for it. Damn the luck.....I mean, Praise the Lord!


( Posted by: HeRoCoMpLeX [Member] On: September 7, 2009 )

Lit.Org PLUG: Merci HeroComplex & Reverend Antinomian;-)


It looks like you went out of your way to plug the Lit.Org on as per Stuart's request of social networking our site...thanks, very interesting site...and I see you are a fan of TRUE BLOOD, as if that surprises me, duh?


Thanks for plugging the Lit.Org on as well Mr. HeroComplex, very nice;-)


( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: September 7, 2009 )

Plugging LitDotOrg
No prob, Karma. Anyone can do it. Just copy this code and paste it onto your own website or Myspace /Facebook pages:

It includes the LitDotOrg banner along with a link to Lit when you click the banner.

( Posted by: thetesticularprancer [Member] On: September 9, 2009 )

code won't show up
It looks like the code won't show up here in our comments. Hmm... I don't know how else to post the code in an 'east to understand' way.

( Posted by: thetesticularprancer [Member] On: September 9, 2009 )

@The Rev
Email it to me. I'm on the litdotorg myspace page as a friend. Look me up and email it to me so I can add it to my page as well. Actually, I think I'm the last one that left a comment on there, so I should be easy to find. You would be doing me a kindness.

Much Love,


( Posted by: HeRoCoMpLeX [Member] On: September 10, 2009 )

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